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I don't read them or anything but I figures I'd try and write one...
The year is crispy young isn't that fun?
Snow is beginning to fall but its not fun
warmer temps make this year more lightly yet no longer lastly.
Spring has come and men will no doubt begin their toil
The fields are no longer chanting
they are ranting.
The ponds and streams no longer swim
and matters are forever becoming green
Apple trees aren't they mean?
Summer is blooming
People are fuming
and now the bees they are dying :-(
Autumns haunting
leaves are falling yet not moving
man is at home and his children are sulking.
Fear not says the god for Christmas is here..
he will sooth our pain and surely lead the way!
Just like the last one and so it begins again...
http://www.dumpert.nl/mediabase/foto/964abae4_canihavemyspiderbackot3.gif
But your poem is well G-shabba homie!
But your poem is well G-shabba homie!
*mouth opens a bit* What's does that mean?
Come write a fucking poem you faggot, they are not easy, infact it feels gay...
My peom
Titled: Beach
The beach is empty
Cause the weather is shitty.
Well your not doing it right :mad:
Seesh, you must find something you feel strongly about and write about it in a poetic way like I did. So for the beach, it might be empty but it was full at one time right? So you talk of the fond memory's when it was full of people and fun and they basically yeah...
No, the shortness of it is to urge the reader to think about the subject!
No, the shortness of it is to urge the reader to think about the subject!
haha good one, it did make me think...
I want to goto the beach now =/
Yo its my first poem its rather gash but I only spent 30 minutes on it...
Nightbrother
11-11-2008, 22:46
Is the water shitty because someone shat in it, or do you mean shitty like in just a little dirty?
Is the water shitty because someone shat in it, or do you mean shitty like in just a little dirty?
Lern2read?
Nightbrother
11-11-2008, 22:48
Ah, fuck. Too bad. The weather being shitty does no good for ambiguity. :p
Nightbrother
11-11-2008, 22:49
Also, I love poems to death, but I'm not gonna flap my shit on here for you to see.
Peom
Titled: Nightbrother
Oh brother of the night
Give us your fucking poem!
Nightbrother
11-11-2008, 22:55
Pom
Titted: Vamp
Oh, sucker of blood thou art named.
I will render unto thee no words of glee,
your wish for my art be shamed!
Oh Nightbrother
Either publish your poem
Or go cry to your mother!
We are urging to see your masterpiece
So.... Please?
What the fuck is going on???
I knew the forum had changed a bit but when did we start thinking it was cool to write poems to eachother????
Nightbrother
11-11-2008, 23:01
'Mom, some German sod is hassling me. Say something to him, please!'
I'm a tickler of willies, a fanciful tit,
my mother is twisted, a right foul git,
she hid a big pile of feces, decades ago,
and I still can't find it, oh woe oh woe.
Poems are cool, screw you ClUR for not being able to. Come on, string together words missy.
What the fuck is going on???
I knew the forum had changed a bit but when did we start thinking it was cool to write poems to eachother????
hahahaha
What the fuck is going on???
I knew the forum had changed a bit but when did we start thinking it was cool to write poems to eachother????
Clur:
Clur, i concur
The forum has changed
but your still clur
your flames will remain!
NOW GTFO OUT OF OUR THREAD
Vamp you need to practise your writing :p at least make it somewhat in time < see how I did that?
Vamp somewhat time.
You can almost sing it if you think about it.
/edit time replaced with timing would be better
Nightbrother
11-11-2008, 23:04
ClUR is a smelly,
a foul poo on her belly,
Vamp put it there,
better than in her hair.
Theres absolutely NO RULES for poems, all they need to do is make people THINK ABOUT SHIT!!!
Translated poem from the master:
Visit to the church
sorry
that im
interrupting
but i
just heard
that
god
does not exist
have a nice
day!
ClUR is a smelly,
a foul poo on her belly,
Vamp put it there,
better than in her hair.
:(
Jesus clur just flame us back in a poetic manner...
Narcolepsy Jones
11-11-2008, 23:14
No offence, right, but you lot can't write poems for shit.
No offence, right, but you lot can't write poems for shit.
Feel free to show one of your total masterpieces?
Oh my brother you are like no other!
Fools are they for they have no say
Worry not my dear friend
For Clur is an unsightful thing.
Vamp here is never near
and pixel is very blunt.
No offence, right, but you lot can't write poems for shit.
Oh Mr Nish how very bish :secret:
Lol just realised and glad I did, I put insightful in stead of unsightful thing when writing about clur, not that I actually really think you're unsightful clur. It just rimed better :blush:
Jesus clur just flame us back in a poetic manner...
I can't Vamp, I'm cringing at this whole thread :sad:
LiL T your poems are absolutley wank.
I can't Vamp, I'm cringing at this whole thread :sad:
LiL T your poems are absolutley wank.
I agree they are wank but tis fun to try and I don't see you trying.... I'm gonna hold my belief yours are worse then mine! Until you show me otherwise. Poems are hard to write and I was never very good at them at school but I thought I'd try a little whats wrong with that for god sake?
I bet I'd write better storys but i'd probably get bored half way through...
Btw the poem started off quite serious until I toned it down a little, it actually has meaning in it. Its going through a typical year in my life and I'm talking from an observation point on the whole thing. How little we care about real matters that are affect this planet etc.
The religion bit is about hating the made up bullshit about Christmas to get us to worship our true god money and you probably won't agree with it...
Nightbrother
11-11-2008, 23:46
Now my charms are all o'erthrown,
And what strength I have's mine own,
Which is most faint: now, 'tis true,
I must be here confined by you,
Or sent to Naples. Let me not,
Since I have my dukedom got
And pardon'd the deceiver, dwell
In this bare island by your spell;
But release me from my bands
With the help of your good hands:
Gentle breath of yours my sails
Must fill, or else my project fails,
Which was to please. Now I want
Spirits to enforce, art to enchant,
And my ending is despair,
Unless I be relieved by prayer,
Which pierces so that it assaults
Mercy itself and frees all faults.
As you from crimes would pardon'd be,
Let your indulgence set me free.
The last 6 lines give me goosebumps. They always have. If you read the entire thing before Prospero's Speech there, the potency becomes downright haunting.
When you understand the meaning of what I wrote it might be a little scary or at least I hopped. Us living each year like the last and getting bogged down with pointless shit and forgetting this beautiful world is dying because of us.
When you understand the meaning of what I wrote it might be a little scary or at least I hopped. Us living each year like the last and getting bogged down with pointless shit and forgetting this beautiful world is dying because of us.
WTF!
Poems? Go visit a slut, much more rewarding.
grindcore
12-11-2008, 00:16
WTF!
Hey Clur,
Nothing really fucking rhymes with your name,
I heard that hitting on Pete is your game
I heard that hitting on Pete is your game
From who:huh:
Nightbrother
12-11-2008, 00:21
Hehe I think he might be one of the few who don't know. Those affected are always told last. :p
WTF!
Not my fault your mind is so small.
Don't harass me i'll fucking make you regret it.
Hey Clur,
Nothing really fucking rhymes with your name,
I heard that hitting on Pete is your game
GG now look what you started! :sleep:
Pixel please close this thread before i stab myself!
Nightbrother
12-11-2008, 00:32
Close it because you're taking it off-topic with your whining about how you don't like poems? You can just stop posting in it instead, if that isn't too hard, miss smelly. :p
'Close this thread, moderator, I de-railed it and now want it to close'.
Are you kidding me? Are you high and drunk?
grindcore
12-11-2008, 00:33
Pixel please close this thread before i stab myself!
Pixel please move this thread to Afterhours,
Before Clur decides to send Pete some flowers!
ahahaha what the fuck...
Flowers
Flowers are just like people
Their nicer when their dead!
Pixel please move this thread to Afterhours,
Before Clur decides to send Pete some flowers!
hahaha! :crazy:
Bestest poet so far! That not something to be proud of mind ;)
Close it because you're taking it off-topic with your whining about how you don't like poems? You can just stop posting in it instead, if that isn't too hard, miss smelly. :p
'Close this thread, moderator, I de-railed it and now want it to close'.
Are you kidding me? Are you high and drunk?
That wasnt a poem?
God I have to break it down for the retard then yeah...
The yeah start cripsy and new. I think we all got that... Its like the last one which it is like that in real life but its changing so slightly we don't notice or retards like clur don't notice.
Snow is beginning to fall but its not fun, due to global warming which is nothing to do with us but yeah.
warmer temps make this year more lightly yet no longer lastly, time is becoming faster and there no time to stop and admire.
Spring has come and men will no doubt begin their toil, we will begin the pointless work all over again.
The fields are no longer chanting they are ranting, they are harming us with chemicals we put on our food.
The ponds and streams no longer swim and matters are forever becoming green, everything is dead in the pond because we killed it with the agricultural chemicals to make food faster...
Apple trees aren't they mean? We are just disrespectful to everything.
Summer is blooming
People are fuming
and now the bees they are dying :-(
People are always so full of matters that are important in the summer and the bees really are dying due to us killing everything...
Autumns haunting leaves are falling yet not moving, massive cultural change of being indoors hating one another, leaves lay undisturbed, think of it what you will.
Fear not says the god for Christmas is here.. he will sooth our pain and surely lead the way! Religion the cure to our failures is not good.
Just like the last one and so it begins again...
hahaha! :crazy:
Bestest poet so far! That not something to be proud of mind ;)
I didn't spot that when I read it. Well done clur, you're a natural
That wasnt a poem?
I don't think he realized grindcore was trying to make a poem, I didn't realize until after I read his first one and made my post, but he didn't have to use me:(
grindcore
12-11-2008, 00:43
I don't think he realized grindcore was trying to make a poem, I didn't realize until after I read his first one and made my post, but he didn't have to use me:(
You're the usual suspect, why wouldn't I use you?
As for these being poems, they're very fucking far from that.
Nightbrother
12-11-2008, 00:45
Alright, I'll edit my post,
To make it look like most
of the others in this thread.
I might also cave in my head.
I wish i was a glow worm
'cause they are never glum
How can you be glum?
When the sun shines out your bum! :crazy:
Nightbrother
12-11-2008, 00:45
What are they?
They are atrocities,
and may cause animosities.
You guys are so fucking boring honestly, I make a serious thread about poetry and you tare it apart with fucking bullshit that is so fucking retarded and boring.
Why is it boring well you seem to wanking at the computer screens over yourself's in a fantastic fit of retardedness that's all. Over totaly fucking retarded shit and jabs and stabs and fuck knows what else to think it was a Tuseday night FFS,k the idoit box is down stairs with you idoit friends that like to think they have a big cock or massive tits...
grindcore
12-11-2008, 00:54
They are atrocities,
and may cause animosities.
.
for all the things i never knew
and all the things that we've been through
i never had the chance to say
how much i think that you're all gay
Pixel please close this thread before i stab myself!
no point crying over every mistake
just cheer up and smile and eat some more cake!
<3
i know u told me travel light
but this heavy heart i just can't leave behind
and as we wonder through this moonlight night
i realise i cant just change my mind
'cause its real, you know how i feel
and ur the answer to my questions
its a deal we made and a chance we take
on a limb for something good
i know longer worry, i've cast away my fears
so kiss me while i finally dry these tears
give me ur loving
make it a chance for something good
i don't want heartbreak
so hold me the way i drempt u would
feel the desire
burning inside my naked frame
lifting me higher
like a caged bird thats been set free
so now we're finally here alone
and ur everything that i hoped u would be
its kinda funny how things feel so right
cant believe for so long i was blind to see
so lets move on and conquer the world
be my friend as i am yours
know that when we may have faultered
ill still give to u my all
this heaven sent addiction
my raptured soul now breaths
please hold my close
please darling never leave
give me ur loving
make it a chance for something good
i don't want heartbreak
so hold me the way i drempt u would
feel the desire
burning inside my naked frame
lifting me higher
like a caged bird thats been set free
Roses are red,
the screen is blue,
i sit here and think;
"what the fuck did i do?"
Yes, think about what you've done LiL T!!!
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OMG HAX LEAVE NOW BEFORE THE ADMIN BANS YOU... YOU... FUKEN FAGET
grindcore
12-11-2008, 10:29
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Slow your sig down, it hurts to watch
Slow your sig down, it hurts to watch
Then look away???
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no its not a zz top song lol
If you wrote it yaself you put a lot of effort in.... respect!
Ronnie Wood could make a song about it if he wasn't shopping:
http://www.spitsnieuws.nl/archives/images/DKRRBE101108a_41.jpg
I bet Ronnie Wood takes her to brown town.
I bet Ronnie Wood takes her to brown town.
Wheres that, i couldn't find it on google maps! :ninja:
Slow your sig down, it hurts to watch
u know vamps, i do agree with him there :p
its a lil fast x)
-Right click
-Block images from....
I don't think I'd come on this forum any more if I couldn't block pete's and vamp's sigs.
Someone feel free to edit the gif in my sig to alter its speed, then send it to me to replace current one...
or i could just edit ur sig :p
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